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MtRC - Chapter04 PG03 by Zimeta MtRC - Chapter04 PG03 by Zimeta
Last page of the comic! I've decided not to finish it.

Just kidding. April Fools' would have been to obvious. ;p

Here's the first glimpse of William's younger brother. The poor guy's not lookin' so good.
And also the first glimpse of Ian. He's pretty important.

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JZLobo Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sentence structure in panel 2 is a run-on. It flows better as "I couldn't. But how are you holding up, Willard?"
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Zimeta Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's true, but I'm not sure I want to change the dialogue because people talk wrong/ in run-ons all the time. :0
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JZLobo Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
True, but it's such a subtle difference, and I think it would make the "flow" of the dialogue read better.
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Zimeta Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Then I shall consider! You are the writer, after all (Always good to have one proof read). :highfive:
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JZLobo Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well if it helps, dialogue is the one element I've always been consistently complimented on. It's all the other elements I've had to work to develop. ;)
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who-stole-MY-name Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ian looks like an iguana :nod: love those spikes ^^
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:iconjesrel:
Oh! Mora alliteration! Ian Iguana, right? Right?

Oh, I love this comic -w-
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Zimeta Dec 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup! :D
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xvosjex Dec 12, 2011  Student General Artist
:heart:
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PhaseChan Dec 12, 2011   General Artist
Aaaaw, Willard! You look tired.... :(

I can't wait to see the rest of this dream....although I know it's going to have some terrible ending of some sort and beome a nightmare.....

I love the top panel, by the way. The colours and the way you've drawn the characters' expressions....I just love it.
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